Shadows Over Lasgalen

Chapter 5: Eléntia

by Jay of Lasgalen

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Warning: much angst and elf torture in this chapter.

By riding hard, the elf patrol reached Dol Guldur by late afternoon. The tracks had become hard and stony, and thickets of savage brambles crossed the path. The thorns scratched the horses and the legs of the elves even through their clothing. As they drew closer, they came across felled trees, many of them. Mighty oaks hundreds of years old, beautiful birches and elms lay where they had fallen, and by the pools and streams graceful willows had been cut down. The destruction seemed wanton and purposeless, for no better reason than that the trees had been things of beauty.  The forest pools themselves were choked and stagnant, cluttered with debris and filth. The stench from the fouled water was nauseating. Legolas stopped in shock.  He could feel the suffering of the trees as a physical agony deep in his soul, and shuddered. “They are poisoning the forest. Destroying it!”

Spoil heaps polluted the clearings, piles of litter, food waste and excrement. Huge flies buzzed slowly through the air, and there were signs that rats had gnawed at the rubbish.  The very air seemed oppressive, thick with the shadow of evil.

“I came down here long ago when the Necromancer was here,” said Alfiel. “It was never like this, never! It must be the work of the orcs.”

“They delight in despoiling the land. I fear it will grow worse as we approach the Tower.” Legolas shook his head in pain.  The bond he had with the forest – though nowhere near as strong as his father’s – made him feel ill at the carnage they could see.

At length they approached Dol Guldur. They had still not caught up with the orcs, who had pressed ahead tirelessly.  They halted at the edge of the forest, concealed by the few remaining trees and their green and brown clothing, and gazed at the desolation before them.  The land surrounding the tower had been cleared of trees, the ground left bare and barren.  Even the grass was withered and brown. Dol Guldur was about a furlong away, in the centre of an area of open ground nearly four acres in size. There was no hope of approaching unseen, not even by night - the full moon would flood the clearing with light.

Roughly halfway to the tower, strung out around the clearing, orc sentinels ringed the tower, facing outwards to the trees. They were the larger creatures they had seen earlier, and were armed with spears, swords and bows. Nearer the fortress were nearly a hundred of the smaller goblin soldiers from the Misty Mountains. They had no idea how many more might be inside - or what else might be there. It was clear that any rescue was going to be very, very, difficult.

Eléntia had been dragged to the base of the tower, and her wrists and ankles manacled to rusty chains hanging from the walls. Her head was bowed. Her hair had come loose and was falling over her face, and they could not tell if she was conscious or not.

“How do we get close enough to rescue her?” breathed Elthan.

Legolas shook his head. “I do not know yet. Maybe at nightfall, before the moon rises. We need to think.”

~*~*~*~*~

This time Eléntia was not out for long, because when she came round the orcs were still chaining her wrists to the tower walls, using heavy, rusty chains that looked like they had seen years of use. She stayed limp, head down, feigning unconsciousness, listening to the orcs’ foul speech.

“What’re we going to do with it? Do you think we can ….” asked one suggestively.

“No, none of that!"  retorted another.  "Keep your filthy hands off it! I’ve got orders - questions first, don’t harm it yet. But after - ” it gave an evil chuckle, sending shivers down Eléntia’s spine - “after, well, we’ll have to see, won’t we?”

The orc quoting its orders - and who would give orders to an orc? Who would dare? And who were the Masters? - moved away, and the ones who had captured her muttered resentfully.

“Fagnor, I’ve had enough of this! Wake it up, let’s get a move on!”

One of the orcs, she thought the one who had been carrying her, picked up a spear from the ground and jabbed it viciously into her side. She could not prevent a cry of pain, and lifted her head. She spat at the orc, and gave vent to her anger, fear and disgust with a torrent of abuse. The orcs could not understand what she said, but could surely judge it from the tone of her voice. One - Fagnor? - came closer. She recoiled, but the movement made the chain on her ankle clank. It was loose. Taking the opportunity, she kicked the orc as hard as she could, right between its legs. The pain that shot through her foot was nothing compared with the satisfaction she felt as it gave a roar of pain and hobbled off, hunched over in agony. The others laughed in derision, and infuriated, it turned on her with a knife. For one incredulous second she thought it was going to kill her there and then, but instead it slashed repeatedly at her, cutting her across her arms and chest. She screamed, she could not help it, hanging limply, the chains around her wrists dragging at her arms.

Suddenly the slashing stopped and she heard the orcs growling at one another in warning. She stayed motionless, panting, the cuts burning like fire, trying to suppress sobs of agony and hopelessness. Slowly she managed to stand, and lifted her head, hair falling lankly about her face. There was a stir of movement among the orcs surrounding her as a figure, cloaked in blackness, approached. A wave of pure evil seemed to emanate from him, and the terror she felt intensified a hundredfold. She tried to back away, but was held fast by the chains.

The figure turned away from her, seeming to look across the waste land to the forest. It spoke in a low, hissing whisper. “I see you. I see you watching your friend.  Come closer, so that you may see what we do to her.”

With a sudden spark of hope, she followed its gaze. Hidden by trees at the edge she could see the rest of the patrol. All of them. They had come for her, they had not abandoned her. No matter what the orcs or this other being did, she was not alone.

As the black figure finished the litany of its plans for her, her spirit quailed again, but the flame of hope could not be quenched. Eléntia lifted her head, looking straight at the others. Across the distance that separated them, as clear as words, her message was unmistakable. Help me.

Now the black robed figure turned its attention back to her. It raised one hand, the sleeve falling away to reveal a bony, skeletal hand. She pressed herself back against the wall of the tower, as it extended one finger to touch her, a feather-light caress. She had time for only one thought. “Ai, Elbereth, help me!”

~*~*~*~*~

While Legolas and his companions watched, one of the orcs surrounding Eléntia prodded her with a spear. Her head rose, and she spat a curse at it, a stream of invective that impressed Alfiel. The chains on her ankles were still slack, and her foot rose, kicking the orc, hard, between the legs. It howled and staggered away, taunted by the jeers of its fellows. She paid a high price for her defiance. Enraged, the orc spun round and slashed at her again and again with a long black knife. She screamed and sagged in the chains. Taniquel flinched and looked at Legolas. “We must do something to help her, and soon!”

As the orc raised its knife again, one of the others grabbed its wrist. “Don’t kill it, remember. The Masters want it alive. They want to question it. If you’re good, he might give it to us after to play with.” Scowling, the orc lowered the knife, satisfying itself with a heavy kick at Eléntia.

Suddenly the orcs fell silent and backed away, cringing and cowering. A tall figure, much taller than even an elf, emerged from the tower. It wore a long black cloak, with the hood pulled forward so nothing of the face could be seen. The five elves watching felt a sense of deep dread fall on them. “What - what is that thing?” mumbled Elthan. There was no response. They all seemed transfixed by the dark figure. It raised its head and stared straight at them, but still only darkness could be seen beneath the hood. Legolas felt a cold fear grip him, and somehow a chill of recognition.

“I see you,” it hissed in a sibilant whisper. “I see you watching your friend. Come closer, so that you may see what we do to her.  Or do you fear to come closer? Do you fear to see what will become of her? She will stay here as our prisoner. Do you know what slow torments we can inflict, so she will tell us everything she knows about your defences, your realm, your pitiful King? Do you recall how orcs were bred from elves, long ago? My orcs will welcome fresh new blood to breed with. She will serve us for a very long time - for you will never free her!”

Crouching in the undergrowth, those listening felt a chill of horror. They all knew what orcs did to captives, who were tortured until death was a release, had heard stories of elves taken by Melkor, maimed and mutilated until they were bound to his will. There were dark tales of females enslaved as brood mares, propagating the foul race. Elthan caught his breath on a note of terror, but Alfiel was gazing at Legolas steadfastly.

“We have no choice. You know what you have to do” he said softly.

Legolas shook his head in desperate denial.  “No! There must be something we can do! Wait until nightfall, take them by surprise - just one or two of us, slow and stealthy - ” he broke off, aware that Alfiel was shaking his head sadly, Taniquel was looking at him with pity, biting her lip, and that Elthan and Math’rin would not meet his eyes. “I cannot do it.  We have to try something.”

“You know what you must do” repeated Alfiel. “You are her captain, her prince - and the best shot of all of us.”

Stricken, wordless, Legolas stared numbly at the other four members of his patrol, at the expanse of cleared, barren ground, and finally at Eléntia.  He wished someone else would take this burden from him, but it would be an intolerable request.  This was his responsibility.  It would be his action, his arrow, his nightmare.  His failure.  Slowly, with a sigh, Legolas nodded, accepting the inevitable. “I know.”

The dark figure had turned from them, back to Eléntia. She raised her head and looked straight at the hidden watchers, fear and pleading in her eyes, as the hooded shape stretched out its hand and touched her, almost gently, on the forehead. She gave a long wailing scream of pain, loss and despair, and those listening flinched. “You must do it now!” pleaded Alfiel.

“I know!” he cried. Hands shaking, Legolas rose to his feet, fitting an arrow to his bow. As he sighted along the shaft he became still, focused, intent. He drew a deep breath and held it. Motionless, he breathed a silent prayer to Elbereth and loosed the arrow. ‘Forgive me, Eléntia.’  It flew true. Eléntia slumped between the chains, the arrow embedded deep in her chest.

~*~*~*~*~

As the creature touched her, Eléntia felt fire sear through her head, obliterating all coherent thought. All hope, memory and love were gone. She gave just one terrified scream as despair, hopelessness and utter terror engulfed her in darkness.

Then fresh pain, clean and purifying, pierced her heart, bringing in its wake calm, stillness and peace. Pain and terror fled, as silence opened and welcomed her.  The darkness was gone, and there was only light.

~*~*~*~*~

Quicker than sight, Legolas sent another arrow into the black robed figure, then another. Both passed straight through, and struck the wall of the tower behind it. The orcs wailed in dismay, but the black figure gave a high keening cry of anger and fury that chilled those listening and watching to the bone. “You missed him!” exclaimed Taniquel in disbelief.

Legolas shook his head. “No. I did not miss. I hit it, I know I did. We should go.” He sounded shaken.

The figure reached forward, and ripped the arrow out of Eléntia’s breast. It inspected it, then with a brutal gesture snapped it in half, throwing the pieces to the ground. Legolas heard a hiss, then the cold voice cried, “Do you think to harm me? I know you, Elf! The royal house of Mirkwood, of Oropher and Thranduil. We will hunt you and all your kind down for this! Begone!”

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